Yeah interesting, great music, and the rain adds some atmosphere without giving a sense of scale really, nice.
Try filming in editing mode (not game mode) as you can then set your movement speed (in the bottom of the editor is a little "speed" setting) so that the film will move a little smoother and slower, so we can take the whole model in. The stopping and starting is a little funny at the moment. You could also really play on that though, and make it like you're a little bunny rabbit or something, jumping and hopping around your model.
Also, if you can, it might be a good idea to add more detail. As in, either add detail to the model, or scale some of your model down, so they are much smaller, and have more of a textural quality. The shapes are all the same size, so there is no real sense of detail (detail makes it more engaging and interesting, so does playing with scale) I think adding detail will help give your model more contrast/hierarchy, which is what it's lacking at the moment.
Yeah interesting, great music, and the rain adds some atmosphere without giving a sense of scale really, nice.
ReplyDeleteTry filming in editing mode (not game mode) as you can then set your movement speed (in the bottom of the editor is a little "speed" setting) so that the film will move a little smoother and slower, so we can take the whole model in. The stopping and starting is a little funny at the moment. You could also really play on that though, and make it like you're a little bunny rabbit or something, jumping and hopping around your model.
Also, if you can, it might be a good idea to add more detail. As in, either add detail to the model, or scale some of your model down, so they are much smaller, and have more of a textural quality.
The shapes are all the same size, so there is no real sense of detail (detail makes it more engaging and interesting, so does playing with scale)
I think adding detail will help give your model more contrast/hierarchy, which is what it's lacking at the moment.
Overall it looks pretty good for week 11, nice :)